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Rated: · Poetry · Philosophy · #1251024
My first poem here, comment and critic, please
I fell in the darkness

I woke up on a scattered room
Like in a confuse dream, one of we never woke right
It was dark, like the night
I felt so confuse, I was being swallowed
But by what?

My feelings are being strong,
For moments it seems that nothing had weakness
But I was terribly wrong
That momentaneous light that invade my heart was illusion
There I woke up to the moment I was being swallowed
But now I know for what,

The darkness came,
I felt no pain
It entered in my body
Invaded my mind
I felt like I know what the feeling of everybody
I saw the hates of the persons, the dark side
And I loved it
Not those cramp attitudes, but the darkness inside
Powerful with no doubt
The stronger weapon that kills
Better than heals

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