My Love-Hand in Hand

This is something I wrote outa the blue, it just came to me as I was lying in bed, thinking about my significant other. I haven't proofed it, fixed it so it flows better, or even finished it. I don't think I ever will. But I guess it's better raw. So tell me what you think . And be nice, it's from the heart.....


i love our hands together
when we hold hands
the way our skin feels against each others
the way your skin feels against mine
the way our fingers are intertwined
its subtle
we are not connected at the hip
but more than the mind
i pull you
you pull me
we walk
one way or another
but we are still together
hand in hand
we let go, but we're still together
we know that we are never apart
but when our hands are together, our fingers intertwined
we are together
we are one
our fingers
so sensitive to the touch
so much can be said
between them, mine and yours
we have so many ways of talking
communication
between our fingertips

your hand curls around mine
my fingers play with your thumbs
we hold; backwards, forwards
our fingers come together like two small streams
merging
into one
a rushing river of emotion
our hands together says
you're mine, i'm yours
we are together
not connected at the hip
but more than the mind
my hand
petite and round, yours slim and made
just for mine
what does the world see when they see us?
together, hand in hand