Sci-fi work in progress

This is my first attempt to write an erotic short story (it may turn into something bigger, who knows) rather than just sex scenes like my previous work. Its in a very early stage and is really only up so that i can access it from everywhere so I've not properly read through the first chapter fully. I'm not sure if I will try to edit it now or try and get a few more chapters up first and edit them all together. Haven't spent much time here recently but hopefully with this on-going project I will be spending more time writing and looking after my other pieces.

Any and all comments are welcomed.

Thank you in advance

MidnightStalka