Named after Stone Sours song ZZYZX Rd because I just really like the title. |
definition of Melee+ Confusion; Turmoil; jumble: A confused tumultuous mingling as of a crowd; an affray. ZZYZX RD. Inspired to question and to know where my thoughts go when they are in shards waiting to be formed again. My mind and body are a melee of scars and memories that have yet to stop. I'm falling asleep and I can't see straight as I sift through the scene before me. I'll put on my best facade for you but I'm still afraid to try you know, Move forward to anything (everything) without your guidance and love to pull me back when the water gets, too deep for me I'm without care, and spendin' time, wastin' time but I'm way too Blind, to even care it's time for me to change my views and save my sanity. Shock this system full, Noone...can...kill...my...mind! even though tonight will end I won't give My...this...life...away, this life is not enough but... Please give constructive criticism on how I can better improve this poem or at least the poem's ending. Any and all constructive comments/criticism welcome+RevelrysSorrow |