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Review by Ziggy Stardust Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, Epica,

I must say, I very much enjoyed your poem . . . it truly struck a chord within my consciousness. How true it is! -- if you want change, you must take action, lest you are nothing but a bystander to those who are willing to forge the future without you.

My only critique would be that you don't have the first word of the last line in your last stanza capitalized.

Very well done, I enjoyed it immensely.

Sincerely,
Ziggy
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