I love it Ms. Stone! I remember having this experience.
This is the time of night where calmness or chaos can create creativity.
So much happens in the nighttime that is the morning,
To breath, to stand, and to listen... It makes that breath you take all the more satisfying.
The sound..... alone is soothing...
even if it is a consistent white noise or an ever changing orchestra,
it still is exhilarating.
The part where it says,"Rocking the world as it slept.... So quietly most has no idea", I would have used " have" instead of " has" it think it hits better. and also using a comma after " quietly". To me it sets the mood and the message at the end. So quietly, most have no idea... 2 am was the time to be alive.../ Whooo it give me chills!!!!
Nevertheless, Your words moved me and I can relate to it so much. around this time is were I truly at my best and it feels good to read a poem that expresses that! Thank you so much for sharing!
I love this! In just a few words it took me directly into the plot of a movie or show, or even into the mind of a soul who's country is going through a real uprising against the government. I'm eager for me. You should make a collection of Short excerpts like this and make the story interactive. It will give you a platform for fans to add to the story. THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!, WHO KNOWS WHAT THE OUTCOME COULD BE!
I love your choice of words in this piece. Love is truly one of the most powerful energies in the world. this poem touched me at a time that I am really going through lost love and trying to find anew. Thank you for sharing this!
Please, Please, Please keep writing. I am an avid lover of anime and manga and I love when fans spin the characters into other situations, plots, and worlds. I loved reading this had me picturing everything. I am looking forward to reading what else you may have!
This is so inspiring and heart wrenching. This moved me and motivated me even more to stay diligent to this group and stay true to my ambitions and strive to always do better and do for others. Thankyou so much for this!!!
These are very great reviews, it pushes me to venture out and read and discover new works that are out there. It makes me want to drop what I am doing just to find them! Thank you for taking time out to provide us with your thoughts, I am pretty sure the authors feel the same way; at least I hope so :)
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