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Rated: E | (2.5)
nice choice of subject-like the title,since confusion is usually the first step towards the fresh air of questioning and therefore towards meeting your intellect,which is great even if you don't receive an answer(which is mostly the cas,certainly when the q. is philosophical like here)-yet,war is a conflict for gaining one's desires,so that in case you hve analyzed this ending with finding the roots of all desires in the need for understanding the meaning and purpose in life,you should hve included that analysis,cause otherwise it seems like a groundless naive claim-like very much the last thought and find it the worthy part in this piece since it's to some extent original while the rest is questioning what has always been q.ed,yet could hve used further analyses as well,particularily the claim that our fight is mainly with ourselves instead of with the world or with it as well-seems like a philosophic thoughtline rather than a literary piece,so why list it as poetry instead of prose when it's missing not the rhymes but the mystic soul of artistic poetry
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