Your piece was very touching and I feel what this person is going through. One suggestion though you should try to break your sentences down in smaller more readable sentences because some lines tend to be a bit long. That was a great piece of advise I received from a senior member. Also remember to edit your work twice! lol
Good luck...
I found your article very informative and appealing to people like myself that does not know much about trojans. I will follow your guideline very well. Thanks
Take it from someone who lives in New York City our world was affected by 9/11
I was lucky enough to have overslept that mornng, because I was scheduled to take a college placement test at Pace University in Manhattan which is 3 blocks from the WTC. The scary part is that I would have been underground exactly when the first tower fell. But a few of my friends were not as lucky as me.
Let me tell you how much this piece touched me... I thought it was great your first set of words are amazing i really like the way you connected the words. Nice Job!!!!
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