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Review of The Home  Open in new Window.
Review by GhostMoonWriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
What a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sad, haunting and scary and I enjoyed the writing itself.

I always felt nursing homes were depressing and you capture it well here. Then the horror of ending up there yourself! Great job!
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Review of The Scream  Open in new Window.
Review by GhostMoonWriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I loved the writing here, and the story was great as well, but I was a little underwhelmed by the ending. I think there could probably be a little more clever ending instead of a fairly standard horror one. That aside, I enjoyed the read. :)
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Review by GhostMoonWriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello. I'm new here, so take my words with some salt.

I liked it. Quite a bit even. However, IMHO, I think it would be more impactful if we realize he did it at the very end of the story instead of 3/4 in. A twist always works best the later it's delivered. Just like a punchline in a joke must be.

Great job! :)
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