I was told that this was a really good story and it was I loved the whole theme of the story it was great. I can also tell how you did the story and that was good also. I liked the way you told the story from yours, mine, or anyone elses point of view and still were able to make it seam like you were talking from Myras view and talking to Ru but the way that I read it the story made me feel like I was Myra. Good job on your story keep up the good work and again you did a great job on this story.
There is one thing that I would like to say about this poem and the is "WOW" because that was a really good poem. I loved the way that you rhymed you did it so perfect I mean it hit right in the middle of the target. Your punctuation was good and you did an awesome job with your use of words and that was just magnificent. This poem is in my top three favorite poems that i have read since I have been on this site. That was just incredible I really think if you use your skills and always do your best you will definitely get noticed by someone. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to reading some more of your poems as well as some others.
I feel that you did an awesome job with this little short story. I also feel that if you continue to write on with the end of this short shory I know that you could stretch it out and make it into a really great book. I really hope that you take this advise that i give you to be able to suceed and become a really famous author. Keep up the good work and I will be look for more of these stories.
This was a very good story, great punctuation, great use of word/vocabulary, and you did an awesome job on staying on topic with the story. I feel that if you could use the topic of this story you could turn it into a whole book and you could get it published and get a lot of awards for your work. I hope that you will continue to write on this story and I also hope that you will continue to do a good job on all of your writings.
This was a really good short shory it actually was one of those stories that I read the first little part of it and then I got so interested in it that it made me want to keep on reading. You did a wonderful job on this piece of work and I encourage you to keep on writing stories like this and sooner or later somebody will look over your work and you will get paid really big money for it. Continue to do a good job.
I really like this poem I think that you did a really great job on it. I can tell that you put alot of feeling into it. My personally I like Romance/love poems that is what i am all about and this one since i have been on this site has been the best one that I have read so far. Keep up on the good work and continue to put a lot of emotions into your poems that is what a lot of people I have talked to are look for when it comes to poems.
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