This is pretty interesting. It would be cooll if you could choose what controls to use but most people don't know the names like the "vortex loop" (that is the weird pump thing in the 10th doctors tardis. They have pretty funky names you should look them up. Any way keep up with the good stories. And never ever give up.
This story is as good if not beter than the goosbumps book set. I forgot it wasn't published by a pro for a while. Pleas don't stop wrighting storys like this they are amazing.
This story shows potential. I don't know if chapter 2 is out yet but if it is I'll find it. Just never ever give up or panic when writing. Panic will make a bad story and giving up wont make a story at all. And considering the talent shown in this, that would be bad
I like it. But is there another one? It seams interesting. I hope that I can make something as good as this. Any way keep up the good work. Who knows someday it might get published for real.
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