From one Christian to another, I thought that this was absolutely beautiful. It brought me to tears and your poetic insight was just brilliant. This was just a poetic piece of art it was an invitation to see perspective and that sometimes life is going to hard sometimes.
This has to be one of the most beautiful personificated poems I have ever read it was so well put together, it didn't just rhyme it truly told a story it was a wonderful please.
I write short stories too, it's my prefrence, I think that you character build and story context was phenomenal, Your a great and creative writer. I can't wait to see more from you.
This is truly an inspiring and deep poem. I think that the way that you used you words were simply perfect for what you were doing, the way you constructed the poem was absolutely stunning, And the personification used in it was definitely up-to-par, and I think that you did an outstanding job with your sentence structure. Overall excellent work.
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