I like how you use a conversational tone. There were one or two typos or misspellings I noticed, so maybe it just needs another proofread. An easy, light read, with interesting information. I was left with one lingering question after finishing the article: "How do you prevent the paint from spoiling on the item you've painted with it?"
Interesting poem. Short and sweet, I like that. Maybe you could develop it a little more and make a longer poem out of it, but even if you decide not to, it's pretty good.
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