Would never buy this song-- in my opinion it's vapid and lacks real substance; what're you trying to say? initially i liked the realness of the first verses, but then the more I read it, the more I felt that a middle schooler wrote this, each chunk basically says, i want you, i didn't get to have you, and i'm not salty. However, if you're not salty, then why are you writing this song about this person? Forgive me for the slang, but it really fits with what i want to say. http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=sal...
I hope I gave you an honest review that helps. What I suggest is to write something that is meaningful to you or write something that spews your honest feelings. honesty is something people want to read; if the person can relate to it, then it becomes interesting.
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