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Review of Fly high  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
really nice, loved it, keep at it.
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Review of The Choice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
OK, if i had to rate it, i would give an 8-9/10. very well written, the beginning was superb, i love how you gave a hint of the end and the beginning, and then went on to explain what had happen, really great way of writing this. it wasn't too long either, I've found on this site that people will pro-long a story, thinking it just makes it better for the reader, but usually it becomes filler and hard to read. this story ended well, had a good pacing, loved it. if i had to give it a flaw, it was that it got hard to read the part when they were arguing over who drank it. i can understand why that was in, but it felt unnecessary, if you cut that in half, it would make that part easier to read and more enjoyable. all in all though, great work, but please, don't make a sequel to it, it ended off well and i wouldn't want to see it turn out bad with another part added on to it.
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