Sounds like a country song to me, too.
I like it, though. I wouldn't change a word.
It reminds me of Kris Kristofferson, somewhat, and his "Sunday Morning Coming Down" but with a little more vitriol. Hate is a powerful self destructing tool. Let it go. Or is this from personal experience?
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