:'( This is one of the most touching things i have ever read. The end is the best. And there is 'magic' in this: "Sheaths of waning light glinted off of her porcelain skin and shimmered through her golden white hair as the sun dropped beneath the horizon" < great expression. Keep it up really! And please, if you have time, then review my work too ^^
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