I can't even put in to words how great this is. I've never known a boy to express himself as well and naturally as you. I see no hesitation in you words, you put it out there for the world to see. I like that. Keep doing things like this and that girl is bound to know what she's missing out on.
I LOVED IT! NO B.S. It was great. I feel like I am in the same position as the person who's falling apart. It's definitely also hard to let go when it took just as much time to latch on to a person's heart and soul. I feel the pain and regret in this piece, yet, I also feel a sense of hope that what once was will be again. I have those combative thoughts every time I helplessly and foolishly fall for someone. Well done!
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