I really liked this poem. I like to read poetry, but I'm not very good at analyzing. I don't know anything about meter or how a poem should be structured, but I did like the rhyming in the poem. I also really like the poem as a whole, especially the ending. The ending pulled it all together for me. Even though it a bit of a dark poem, it left me with a good feeling when I finished reading.
I greatly enjoyed this. I don't have a disability, but I work with those who do, and my mother is now legally blind in one eye and is considered disabled. I really liked you tied everything together and showed that the real disability it not anything that a doctor can diagnose but it not being able to change and grow.
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