This poem is good for me...you said that this is your old poem...may be you're still a teenager at that time...your words are simple and it doesn't rhyme and flows well...so keep on writing...this poem is well expressed in free verse way...i can feel the emotions in your words and i can see that you have big potential to become a brilliant writer.
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