Hello, Griffin. This is probably one of the funniest poems/stories I have ever read. (Pssst. Griffin, It's me, the one who told you about this website. Have you read any of my stories yet?) Anyway, back to your story. Like I said, it's hilarious. I liked the part about the atom bomb and the moral. The moral was probably my favorite part!
Wow! Really good story! The first time I read this, I had to stop halfway through, because It was creeping me out. I finally finished it, and I was really spooked. I would have rated it 5 stars, but I thought it was sad, the way Becky and Johnny died. really liked it. Write on!
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