OH MY GOSH!!!!! That as an amazing story!! I absolutely loved it! The Idea actualy seems probable, and the story is so wel told that it realy does seem like itis being told by smeone who was realy there. I realy enjoy stories like these, so I was realy glad to ffind such a amazing one. I realy look forward to possibly reading more of your work. I cannot believe what an absolutely amazing story this was. It is my hones opinion that you probably cannot do any thing to make it better! Great job!
I liked the story, but I think you should try and work on your spelling a bit. Other than that I realy loved it!! (BTW I am an author in high school too.)
-Writer Wolf-
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