Boy, can I relate to this! It's amazing how people are not always appreciative of how much energy you put into something. I've been in lots of situations like that. You did a good job of honestly portraying the feeling of being unappreciated. I like the simplicity of your poem and how it can reach out to a large audience. Even though it is not written with a consistent pattern, it seems to flow well. Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. (Maybe you should get yourself a writing job somewhere ...you're appreciated in that field! )
Suzanne
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Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. (Maybe you should get yourself a writing job somewhere ...you're appreciated in that field! 
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