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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is perfect, I can't say more for the benefit of others who might read this before the story.
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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is very clever and original. It's really short, as advertised, but it's worth re-reading instantly to make it last a little longer.
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Review of Food for words  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very silly fun!
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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Entertaining, and I love the first poem. Overall this is fun, but could use some expansion, and more action to display character/personality. A very good start.
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Review of Bite of Vengeance  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very cute, mostly well done. The viewpoint shift at the end seems a bit sudden, and I'd like to hear more about why Vesta doesn't like Amy, other than her perfume. A bit confusing, Amy has paid a few visits, in the first section, but then is reassured she'll love Vesta the instant they meet at the end.
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Review of Fun With Felines  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is terrific, as in terrifying and still extremely funny. Being a cat servant, I thought I saw the punch coming at "half-a-dozen" cats (I was wrong), but I can actually see and smell the unexpected ending. Very well done!
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Review of A Penny Saved ...  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Laughing too hard to review!!!!
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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is ridiculous, and like all good character-driven comedy, you just can't point to a spot and say here, this is where it all went wrong. This needs a bit of proofreading, but I'm looking forward to the next episode. Very well done!
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Review of Abby's Dragon  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice start to a very interesting novel (hint, hint). Good capture of characters in such a short piece.
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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good work, keep it up.
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Review of Deserted Island  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I wish "other" had a place to specify who the other would be. I'd pick the closest thing to a real MacGuyver I could find. I'd never just accept banishment, and when I got back, boy, would I be pissed!
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Review of What's Behind Me?  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is goofy, funny, and clever. Well done!
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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
"...slap hard enough to get worker's comp..." What a delightful image! This is funny, funny, funny.
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Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Laugh out loud, roll on the floor funny. I want to hear more about Reese and Nanny.
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Review of Bad Tires  Open in new Window.
Review by Chriswriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is entertaining, but not a short story. A story has a beginning, middle and end, a situation which must be resolved, and should show some change, somewhere. However, this is a great start to a possible short story. Show us the events which led up to the hanging. Your protagonist has the start of a great character, now give the victim/criminal some personality. Give us the whole story, this is worth expanding on.
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