I liked the rhyming in this poem. The forties aren't that bad and you have shown the reader that. Nicely written. Overall impression was humorous and felt better about being in my forties.
I could really remember those nights? You just have a way with words that takes the reader to where you are. Keep up the good work. I just love being in the places you write about.
Wordsyswife
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