this is a really good poem. i understand the feeling perfectly. i especially love the line "But I guess that the container that held our friendship lost its lid."
this is a very entertaining story! i enjoyed reading it and laughed to myself alot. it's so different from the version i've written. i havent put it on this site yet, but i wrote a little bunny foo foo story a few years ago. in my version, the bunny is a male, and he blasts mice with a super soaker squirt gun. when i get it on the site, you should read it. anyway, i really enjoyed reading this version! keep up the good work!
I really like this short story! great emotion, and the ending was a surprise to me. i especially liked this line, "Every time I hear that name I shake and my heart slams against the side of my chest, like its trying to tell me its angry with me." you are a great writer! keep it up! :)
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