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Review of Father's Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought it was pretty good except for me it was a bit short. At the end I realized I wanted to read more.
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Review of Ghouling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very nice piece of work! While reading I found the essence of wording putting into mind what would or should be seen by the reader. Captivating enough to keep me reading to the next line and follow to the end. The only real problem I had was in the lack of a rhythmical flow in certain places throughout. Over all though I found it to be quite good and look forward to reviewing more of your work.
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