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Review of Color Your World  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I truly love your short poem and how it is written. concerning colors and occupationsof others

keep writing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I surely love revivals where the Holy Spirit is present and brings special people to the Savior to listen to Him. Some people only want to do the talking to Him, praising Him and thanking him. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this time with the Lord. However we must be open to hearing His Voice speaking to us. I am happy you had this experience as you had before. I love the way you discribe it.
You all got the rain of the Holy Ghost, praise His wonderful name.

In the sentence below that I copied and pasted from your testimony is this sentesnce
I just sat their in the darkness The word their should be spelt "there" meaning a place. Their is a 3rd person of they in ownership.

Keeping writing of your experiences with God.
God Bless
witness4HIM
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was instructive and helpful, but had to click from one item to another in a short period of time when I wanted to gatherr as much of your guidelines as possible.

There is certainly a vas amount to grasp in becoming a "newbie" on Writing.com. It truly is a wonderful place for writing and being reviewed for new and published authors.

Thanks for the prevlledge of revewing and being a part of the Writing.com
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