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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed the story. I wish it were longer. There is a lot happening here that I see between the lines. I would like to know the names of the mice and where the ship was headed. It would put time and place together to enhance the story. I was impressed that you could bring out so much action in such a short story. Thanks, PKP
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