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Review of My Favorite Bison  Open in new Window.
Review by Ron Henry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This intensely personal account of your deep friendship with the bison is very moving and reminds of the deep bonds that can develop between humans and animals. I have often said that animals are closer to their wisdom than humans. Man's extreme brain power sometimes causes him to think he is the greatest thing that ever lived. Animals often see through this self-deception because they are not caught up in it. This in a very inspiring story that deserves to be published somewhere..

The 4.5 rating is due to grammatical and syntax mistakes. I can point them out to you if you like, but I do not have the time to do it right now.

Keep telling your stories. You might be able to compile a series of them and publish them in a book about animals.

Even consider a version for young people! Kids need to learn and appreciate the animal kingdom in the way you have!

All the best to you!
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Review of Lies  Open in new Window.
Review by Ron Henry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A thoughtful reflection on lying. Lies are certainly not always black and white. Clever liars can make a lie seem like the truth. Those are the ones to watch out for. It is the lie you cannot see that is the most dangerous.

Thanks for sharing this. It made my wheels turn.
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