That was a sad, beautiful, heart-wrenching, amazing story! I was absolutely blown away! Honestly, that was one of the best short stories I have ever read. There were some spelling mistakes and typos, but it didn't matter because the story and the way you described it was perfect! Amazing work! Haha, I'm jealous! :)
- Marissa
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