This was a fun story to read and probably a lot of fun to write too! Knowing that it was from the perspective of an article of clothing made it easier to understand, but I think it would also be fun if I hadn't known and was trying to figure out what was going on. I say this because I had a lot of fun trying to figure out what article of clothing the main character was and only just figured out before it was given away.
I did notice a few things, I would have liked to know more about Cindy. The mention of the double date kinda confused me, but I think I got it sorted out.
And grammatically:
"Time heals wounds" -shouldn't it be "time heals all wounds"?
I noticed something else but I can't find it now so I must have just misread it the first time.
Anyways, great story
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