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Review of Pit Stop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good story. Your grammar and spelling was good. You characters were believable. The end makes you think. I was starting to think it was beginning of a horror story.
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Review by Isabella Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Written well. I wonder though if really loves him as a lover or a best friend because those feeling can get mixed up. I really didn't see any problems with your writing.
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Review of The Pink Cooper  Open in new Window.
Review by Isabella Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story. I thought that combining the missing of Cooper and the Pink Panther. I did not see any errors in your writing.
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Review of Ease My Mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good story. Some issues with grammar. You seemed to get the emotions of the situation just fine.
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Review of Mortal Beauty  Open in new Window.
Review by Isabella Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought it to be a great poem, very descriptive. I liked that you give credit were it is due. I also liked the fact that you told the "lady killers" may have to watch out for the "femmefatale".
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Review of You are my Bee  Open in new Window.
Review by Isabella Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem has some good feeling to it. The main things that it needs are commas and periods to allow the poem to flow more freely.


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