I am so glad that there is a weight gain story out there with so many chapters! It is such a good topic that really anything could happen so I suppose it makes it that much easier to write about and to add chapters to! And I really like how you give the character a bit of a back story, with what his family being big and him always feeling like a black sheep. All in all the best interactive weight gain story I've seen in a while!
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