i really do not get the message of this poem and i think it need some editing , just like in the part of i am extremely extremely beautiful, i don't think the extremely needs to be repeated. i hope you are not hurt by this, its just a suggestion that you re edit this
This is a lovely poem, sometimes our memory is more than enough for us, i often wonder what happens to those who lost their memories, i love the use of words ,every line expressing the emotion of the poet....lovely poem.
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