First off I was reluctant to read this story at first due to the religeous overtones, and I will also say it was a bit slow to start but it be came extremely gripping the more I got into it. I love the fact that Tommy is an anti-villan (someone who does bad thing but for a good reason). and that the religeon is almost the true villan in the story. i thought it was well written and a all around cool story.
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