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Review of build and crash  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very Good!
Its such a simple and unimportant subject for the reader, but the way you describe the wrecking (i'm guessing that is what it was) makes the poem interesting and it makes the reader want to hear more and keep reading.
Keep it up!
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