Enjoyed your story .I think it explains very well the situations we can get into. Thank you for writing it , Please continue to write more, I think you have a natural talent for seeing into life. And by the way I'm a loner too.
Bravo. Glad to see he got his just award for his treachery. Very good story. I would have liked to see the haunting and his torment into madness a bit longer.But over all, good work.
I enjoyed the straight forward message of this story. I actually started to like and respect the main character for his caring attitude. I admired his courage for confronting his boss with the idea.The writing was very good and didn't bore me with in between jibber-jabber.The story is also a message we all should take into consideration. There are people and animals that need our love and attention.Thank you for reminding us.
I feel like I just made a trip to the Twilight Zone.
I enjoyed the story it kept me hanging on.
It had a David Lynch feeling to it.
Keep working on your style. I like where you're heading.
Good luck on your endeavors.
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