This is a very fascinating poem and quite well written. I actually felt the words working like a calleidoscope of colour and thought and feeling...it is quite impressive and quite intense. The concept of timelines, of things that collide coallesce and mingle, get lost and fade....it's really cool. I don't know if i totally grasped the meaning of the poem, but I really enjoyed it, so thank you for sharing!
Keep up the brilliant work!
W
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