Brilliantly expressed, emotionally moving. You have a very unique style of expression which allows the reader to connect even though the thoughts put forth are of a deep and profound nature. As far as structure I found no problems. Grammar was spot on. I look forward to reading more from you!
A very beautiful read, as I write these words emotions swell within my heart and I am moved to tears. Not for the loss of such a beautiful spirit, but in honor of her, you see, your words so beautifully and eloquently expressed tell the story of my mother as well. Thank you so much!
What a wonderful story, well written and perfectly delightful to read! I found the characters to be well developed, charming and engaging. The message was well delivered and the dialog flowed from beginning to end. A thoroughly enjoyable read, how fortunate for me that It was a sponsored item, otherwise I might have missed out on such a wonderful read!
It was just happenstance that I found your poem today. A very extraordinary read, I found myself deeply moved by your ability to express with such beauty thoughts beyond the normal day to day experiences of the average poet. However, although your ending was very good, I have only one issue. I did not want it to end.
What an inspiring piece, well constructed and an easy read. There are a few proofreading errors, but they did not take away from the message. This piece encourages the reader to pursue their dreams, and to climb out of the neat little boxes of acceptable social status, to give life to one's own passion no matter what others may think or say.
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