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Review of You Never Knew  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I've been blown away before, but never this strongly. What makes any piece of writing click is its ability to leave the reader thinking long afterwards; its ability to leave an impression upon the readers mind.

I feel this has succeeded marvelously, and while reading it I honestly felt like it was directly related to what I felt when I went through a similar situation...

You have great talent; keep writing, and keep sharing.
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Review of I love You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here's a translation of "I love you" in Urdu.
"Mein tumsay mohabbat karta hoon."

And in Pig Latin!
"Iay ovlay ouyay."

I love the poem itself. Even though beliefs may differ from religion to religion, the love for God does not change, and that is a great message. I like the way you're collecting different languages! Good work.
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Review of A Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is my second review of your work, and this too, is very good. The flow and form is seamless, but there was one time that it seemed to lose it's flow;

"She is what you never thought you needed."

The above line sort of breaks the rythym for me, in that the rest of the poem is short sentences and this is almost double the size of some of the others...

That was the only thing I could be negative about.

As with the other poem I reviewed, I love the end,

"She is love's best rejection.
A story without the words.
She is anger's fairest form.
Speaking but not heard.
She's all that no one understands.
A dreamer in disguise.
She's not all you get in what you see.
She's the reflection in your eyes."

I also like the quote in your profile bio-block. Very thought-provoking!

I can see you have talent, and I encourage you to keep it up and keep writing.

Waleed.
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