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Review of Competition  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice little office theme!! I have not come across those in a while!!
This explains that some people are forced in a scenario where they have to do something or participate in something they have no interest in... especially when it is something they have been needing for a while..

Thank you for this... truly needed it
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Review of Thief!  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Aww!!! Such a touching short story!!
I wish it works out for them!!!
A new hope for new young couples to experience love the way it was meant to be!!
Unconditional!!!
Hopefully everyone who reads it expects a good ending for the two
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am a huge fan of reading fantasy and I really really really want an extended version of this story!!! It's such a good theme and setting for a story that I feel like it would be amazing if you could write more in the setting!!

Love it!!! *Heart*
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Review of The Interview  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
"Who is going to hire you?" and "When will you grow up?" are phrases I hear from my own parents all the time... And I wish I had the nerve to do the things that they are against...

It took me a long time to convince them to let me do what I want to do and the quote is accurate.!!
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Review of A Simple Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ooff.... I really wish everyone would just quit what they don't want to continue doing in life just for their happiness rather than people continuing their work for financial stability... that should never ever be a factor to do what you hate for the rest of your life but unfortunately it is...
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Review of Jack And Jill?  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
OH MY GOD!!!

I filled in the 1. - 4. thinking it was what they would have felt after they broke a turtle egg nest!!

This is hilarious as I was unexpected.... I liked it a lot!!

Thank you for the laugh I needed in a while!!
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This explained me overthinking about my significant other when he spends his time away from me for a long time...

These are the exact sentences and exactly what I do when he doesn't come on time or when I am in need to support or just his presence...

I relate to it a lot
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like how you tried to explain life using a marathon reference...

It's a new way of saying not to give up when you said "The distance determined by my will."

I also like this "My brain reminds me of why I push my body to its limits." It kinda reminded me on why i like working out and running
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Review of Thieves  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Ohh noo....!!!
I really wish he got away with it...
Is there a more elaborate version of the story??
I really need to know how he escapes his fate...
I have so many questions...
Like
"How did they find him?"
"What was the heist?"
and so on...
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Starting off, I am so sorry for your loss... I understand what it feels like to lose a family member. And yes, Covid did take a major part of us in most ways... Did I just read someone stole from you?? What in the world!!??? The situation of the pandemic has taken a toll mentally on a lot of people and I'm glad to read that your dad has taken professional help.

I'm really sorry this year has been rough on you... And I believe that there's always something good after something bad so yes, I believe the next year would be great for you... Hopefully the severity of the situation will reduce and will be back to normal for you...

Take care!
Violet
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Review of Naturlicious  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a nice and fun way to recollect nature at it's best... To be able to put simple words in crosswords still fascinates me as it's quite hard to make crossword puzzles... This was really fun... Enjoyed bringing back the time I studied about them
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
loved the crossword!! brought back so many childhood memories of when I was reading the books and watching the movies... super fun to recollect those... started to wonder back to the days I first came across these characters... brought back lovely memories... Thank you
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Enjoyed the quiz!! I am not getting the 1st one at all!! Could you please let me know what the answer is??I would really appreciate it... nothing comes to mind at the moment... I've been tryin for an hour already... silly me... anyway... Made me do some good thinking...
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The hypothetical question is a great one... But I feel that there's no need in changing the boxes because it's the same thing... the same probability is applied for both, i.e., a fifty-fifty. So it doesn't matter which box I choose next after the quizmaster does... Loved the question

The other thing is.. how do I submit the quiz? I didn't get how you score the quiz...
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Review of Famous Quotes  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The reason why I love Mad Libs is because of this... I got into them because of The Tonight Show starring Jimmy Fallon... And this was the first Mad Libs I did so I'm pretty happy because this is hilarious... I never knew that we can make a Mad Libs post over a few quotes... I enjoyed it
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Review of Enchantment  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem is as beautiful as the lady cloaked in blue... your description about the lady is fascinating and it depicts to the picture at the beginning... The night sky is also described well by using 'silver ball' for the moon... I like this poem a lot... Simple and elegant...
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The quiz is quite mind opening... I've not come across such quite like this one and I enjoyed it... I liked putting myself in the shoes of something that might not exist and now I feel like knowing more about it...

The only tiny thing I wish was changed is the options for the first few questions... Instead of A, B, C you could have written the actual options without writing it in the questions.

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Review of Animals II  Open in new Window.
Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a fun exercise for a short amount of time...
I did get stuck on a few for a while but it was fun...
I didn't know a few things and it made sure that it gave me information I never knew by searching for the answers (I know I cheated but hey! I learnt something)
But yeah it was nice and fun...

Thank You,
Violet
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow... That was a very inspiring essay and it applies to a lot of us... Many people do not realise it but some, like you, have the ability to take a moment and say "Wow, I am that person". I also thank you for such incredible advice at the end that most of need (like myself)
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was a truly emotional story... I have read a few stories involving characters such as George 1 and George 2 but none whatsoever compare to the storyline you have provided here... It's beautiful with a sad ending... It proved that friendship too is a relationship that can showcase sacrifice...
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was a deeply emotional story... I have read about things like this but none on this level... Truly appreciative grammar and the storyline is spot on...
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Review by Violet Brenner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was a deeply mesmerizing poem. It still startles me about how one can love another on that level. Your input in the poem speaks more than the wording present and it is the pureness of love that gets to us quite easily, although it is known to be complicated. You've made it easy for the reader to understand both points of view. I love it is the only thing I can say at this point.
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