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Strength in sentences: It is absolutely peaceful…
Uniqueness: Your strong vibes creates a circle of vision, of a wonderful world to enter…
Most Favorite: The grass, soft as a bunnies tail,
laying down in the sun,
the light bright as a newborns eyes.
And this is what amazes me:
The snow melting away.
A contented sigh is heard from afar.
Laughs sputter from full bellies,
as no one is left to sit alone.
Acknowledgement: You may think your writing is a formal set of mind contemplating piece. Written with spontaneity and child-like perception… But it’s more than that; I feel the kindness & sincerity of your poem ~is without ego~ :)
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem :D
Simple,
yet Impressive,
There are much more freedom in these verses that it shows *
From the Great Sea
to the Father of Waters
they came to dance
and pray for visions
of peace.
* feels like I can manifest these so clearly :> beautiful choosing of words
The smoke of fires
and ancient calumets
rose into the night air.
** I feel however (though you mean it good), it feels sad in a good way... like replacing loss with clarity -as "being uplift from a burden"
The men and women
with running step
and stomping feet
circle slowly
to the words and chants
of the singers.
*** maybe, it's just me- but the singers I perceived wholly as angels - and the poem does remind me much of David :D beautiful - whether or not you intend this scenery- it's beautiful *
The emotion is in excellent path - it is straight and touching, and so very serene. I'm curious to see more of your poems, I sense there are still wider and sharping creativity in your fingers; for they might hides exciting characteristic in it *
I could not help but being amazed, swallowed, and hurled within the brilliance verses of your poem. The poem is extremely beautifu;l and full of emotions, to me, I can feel and sense it -REAL.
My country is actually one who has been stroke by tsunami in these past 4-5 years, you may have heard in the news- it's gigantic.
I can't help it, I will have your writings- stamped beautifully in the wall of my room- just because it's so amazing:>
Thank you
And God bless you
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