Your poem catches my attention quite well, right from the beginning. I don't really have anything 'negative' to say about it. It's a nice piece, though I feel a bit sad reading it. It gives me the feel of waking up that way, and not feeling like I am who I should have been. I prefer the happier poems, but you did a good job with this one.
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