ChloeFR's (vibrantafrican) Reviews

ChloeFR

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#4365335

Review of The Old Veteran

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This was beautiful!! Wow. I was blown away. Great job!!

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#4205339

Review of Disrespectful hero.

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Wow. This was really good! I loved how you never named anyone, just referred to them as what the soldier called them. Keep up the good writing!!!!

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#4186517

Review of Door of my Heart

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (5.0)

That made me cry. It was so beautiful and heartfelt and touching... I can't even find the words to describe it. Wow. Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. I've read anything like this before, and that's saying a lot, because I've read some pretty good stuff. I have no doubt that you have the potential to do great things.

EVEN THE SMALLEST PERSON CAN CHANGE THE COURSE OF THE FUTURE.

Remember that.

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#4186516

Review of Quiet

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Wow... That was very heartfelt and touching. I could really relate to it. Thanks for sharing

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#4062496

Review of Voice Of The Moon

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This was unbelievable!!! You described things so well. There are a few typos, but nothing major. It was beautiful to read. Keep it up!!!!!

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#4056991

Review of Become the Giant

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was amazing! I love poems that talk about feelings and spiritual stuff. Keep up the good writing!!!!!!!!!

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#4054227

Review of The Edge of Space - chapter 2

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Nice! I understand your story a little better. I'm looking forward to Chapter 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#4053416

Review of A Pristine Spirit

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was beautiful!! I've always loved poems that describe life, death, all that stuff. Yours was so beautiful! Post some more like this!!!!!

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#4053194

Review of The Fun House

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This was really good! I even got spooked. This is one of those stories that explain everything. I already know how your character was feeling, who he was, blah blah blah. I really enjoyed this story. But I think next time you should explain a little bit about what those different areas of the funhouse were. My family doesn't go to parks, so I've never been a funhouse. Other than that, this story is one of my favorites!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#4051633

Review of The Edge of Space - chapter 1

Review by ChloeFR

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Very interesting. This is the first chapter, right? If it is, I think in the next one who should explain a little bit about what's going on. But other than that, I like it! It reminds of Star Trek and Star Wars. Keep up the good writing.