I really enjoyed your poem. I thought it was beautiful and had remarkable imagery. The emotion was evident and the repetition was relevant and added rhythm to your poem. Great Job!
I enjoyed your prologue immensely. At first, while interested in the story, it did seem a tad cliche. However, the ending really drew me in and solidified my interest. What a remarkable beginning. Good Job!
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