Beautiful poem! I love trees too. Perhaps, if you wanted to improve, you could focus on the length of each line, maybe the grammar of certain lines. It is a very good poem though.
I wanted a chance to post some of my writing, maybe get some experience with fiction and just get some feedback. Writing.com emailed me; I remembered that I had set up an account with them before, so checked it out and decided to enter one of the contests. I love the prompts, reading other people's work, and of course, winning. So far, I haven't seen any that needs improvement, but I will certainly give a head's up if I do. Thanks for giving writers a chance!
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