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Review by jim velentino Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
it was really a hilarious story. i enjoyed reading it.

i really liked the theme of your story- original and funny.

yeah money can buy you certain types of love. but try buying another type. ok dont even bother.
the story was brilliant once again.

i hope ypu will also like my poem "a call from life" and feel free to put your opinion on my poll "universe and thought".

have a nice day.
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Review by jim velentino Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
well, I wasn't lost in time while reading your story and hoped it to soon end.
you need a lot of hard work man!
nonetheless I wouldn't say you are a bad writer.
keep writing more.
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Review by jim velentino Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
if only I had words to describe....
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