This is a great poem. I love it dearly. It made me think about the one I loved and lost recently, so maybe that's why it's struck me in the heart, but either way, thank you for this masterpiece.
The only thing I have to say is that maybe you should use more commas / periods in it to make it easier to read, but it might be a stylistic choice to not.
Again, thank you. I'd make a badge for you if I had more GPs.
I particularly like the latter fourth, and the ending two lines.
I can read it, knowing the rhythm it's supposed to be read in, and it sounds good. I feel the emotions attached to the poem, it's good at relating how you're feeling. Overall, good job.
Only thing I can think of is that you had a rhyme/slant rhyme going between the second and fourth line of each stanza, but that breaks off in the last one.
Short and sweet. Good twist to Lucy not being a person, but a dog.
However, there's a few errors. The quotation marks weren't closed, and the word luxuriating doesn't fit where you put it. It'd also flow better if you removed "were" from the first sentence.
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