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Review of Reflections  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem. I love it dearly. It made me think about the one I loved and lost recently, so maybe that's why it's struck me in the heart, but either way, thank you for this masterpiece.

The only thing I have to say is that maybe you should use more commas / periods in it to make it easier to read, but it might be a stylistic choice to not.

Again, thank you. I'd make a badge for you if I had more GPs.

I particularly like the latter fourth, and the ending two lines.

Thank you. Please continue writing poems.


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Review of Anxiety  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. I understand the feeling, so it speaks right to me. Good job- there's not really anything to nitpick here.
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Review of Deserted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Short and sweet. Good twist to Lucy not being a person, but a dog.

However, there's a few errors. The quotation marks weren't closed, and the word luxuriating doesn't fit where you put it. It'd also flow better if you removed "were" from the first sentence.
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