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Rated: E | (2.0)
The scene was poignant and descriptive, yet I felt it had little substance. It was like a scene from a larger chapter....is it? Or is this flash fiction?

I also have an aversion to words like "men did not cry," because we all know that is not true.

As far as a death scene, it was soft and fluffy.
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